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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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I don't think it's ugly - the concept is actually really well done, and the general tone of the image of what (I assume) you are conveying, works. There's emotion there, so something did get through.
I think maybe spending a little more time, offering more precision on the outlines of both Snape and Hermione could boost up the beauty of this. I know cropping is hard with people (hair and fingers are an absolute pain) but CTRL+ALT+Z is my favourite tool because it's a matter of do-over, do-over, do-over until you get a crop that you are satisfied with. It just allows a more believable blend into the background.
Also, it's always nice to share your views on your work - what is going on in this story that you created with this image, why this scene, these poses, this shade. (Well you don't have to...I'm just always interested in the why!)
I hope I haven't offended you in any way, that was really not my intention at all.
Thanks for sharing. (And pardon my babbling.)
I tried but the pic doesn't match with the concept. And yes, it's very hard and that looks like that, because that pic of Emma, have letters on her and was very difficult to hide that...
Yes I know...isn't the first time that I do this (I sucks on that but I have one that makes me feel proud of it...and is this one: [link]) quite simple...
Sorry for the ugly things...I will do it better. Promise.
You shouldn't apologize. Like I said, the tone, the ~feeling~ got through. There's just a question of a little precision which comes with practicing! And there's nothing wrong with that - it's the only way we can get better.
It takes guts to post creations on the web - it really does. So kudos to you!
Keep going - you're doing great!! ♥♥